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Old 11-23-2002, 10:58 PM
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One of my older outside levels..

Some people has probably already seen this, but I kinda like it, so I'm gonna post it up for rate again, anyway, here it is.

(Note : Might be some tile errors, because I haven't checked it that much , really.)
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Old 11-24-2002, 12:46 AM
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i like 9/10
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Old 11-24-2002, 12:50 AM
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Old 11-24-2002, 01:16 AM
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I'm not to fond of the grass detail.
It looks way to messy for my liking.
Other than that it's nice.
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Old 11-24-2002, 01:28 AM
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House:
This is interesting, It may be a bit big though, bit nice usage of tiles here, although you could do something with that shadow as it doesn't fit that well, as it just stops in a line and looks weird, although in real life I suppose it would!

Grass:
This is good, but not brilliant, in front of the house it looks too much like odd random tiles just placed to fill in the spaces, maybe you should have spent more time on this.

Trees:
Trees are nice, they fit in well, but you dont really need the treetop IMG NPC at the top do you?

Lights:
Nice, maybe have some odd ones as lanters infront of the house and not just on it!


Sparks Rating: 7/10
It would be more, but the grass detail lef you down. But anyway this is an old level and you have learnt from your mistakes!
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Old 11-24-2002, 01:50 AM
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House:
This is interesting, It may be a bit big though, bit nice usage of tiles here, although you could do something with that shadow as it doesn't fit that well, as it just stops in a line and looks weird, although in real life I suppose it would!

Grass:
This is good, but not brilliant, in front of the house it looks too much like odd random tiles just placed to fill in the spaces, maybe you should have spent more time on this.

Trees:
Trees are nice, they fit in well, but you dont really need the treetop IMG NPC at the top do you?

Lights:
Nice, maybe have some odd ones as lanters infront of the house and not just on it!


Sparks Rating: 7/10
It would be more, but the grass detail lef you down. But anyway this is an old level and you have learnt from your mistakes!
he posted this on CB forums too, he is trying out
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Old 11-24-2002, 01:57 AM
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Yeah, I saw the grass detailing, but as I said, I didn't check it BEFORE I posted it, so forgett the oddness about that, or atleast try, heh..
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Old 11-24-2002, 03:16 AM
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Old 11-24-2002, 07:50 AM
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hmmm, dont like the grass much...it seems like you just took every grass detail you could find and tossed it in there. Ummm...the house is nice, and kind of original, but use of those little square boxes is overdone (you know, the little blocker tiles) But overall, it's a pretty nice level.

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Old 11-24-2002, 08:07 AM
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Old 11-24-2002, 08:11 AM
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Yea no one's levels compare to yours

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Why can't I post my opinion?
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Old 11-24-2002, 08:55 AM
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Yea no one's levels compare to yours

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Well that one sure doesn't compare to Justin's.

People are being way too generous on rating people's levels.
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Old 11-24-2002, 12:56 PM
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Well that one sure doesn't compare to Justin's.

People are being way too generous on rating people's levels.
Thanks for backing me up.
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Old 11-24-2002, 01:27 PM
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O_o... Are you the same person from AIM?
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