(Lamer) dun dun dun....

[magicbud3344]

(LAMER POSTING)
I have decided to start "showing off" my work to everyone.
I'm open to opinions.
But before saying "oh you need to fix that" read my whole post.
Also dont post stuff like "that sux yo lol" (I dont think the mod. allows that anyways)

So heres my first level.
I'll try to cover everything you might ask to avoid multiple posts :

Level Type: House , A house deep in a forest. The house keeper is a lumber jack that found a huge oak tree. He decided to carve the insides out. But soon his axe broke. So he built a house out of wood beside it instead. :P

Inspiration : Boredom mostly. You will find 80% of my levels are boredom and 20% are actual work :/. Need to change that up some I guess.

Time spent: About 30 minutes. I had to make the img in the front which took awhile since I couldn't find a gif converter.

What needs fixed? :
1. Lights need added.
2. Npc that detects if you use lights or not. So then it knows wether to show the npc with light or just the img.
3. Transparency to the front img. Where you see the grass on the front wall. That is actually an img. So you can walk behind it or so. I need to make the grass parts transparent.
4. Back room to it and the stair case going to the upstairs bedroom.

I think I cover most of it.
Please give me a rating from 1-20 (prefered) or 1-10.
Also add an explanation to your rating so I know what to fix on it.

Thanks,

(LAMER POSTING)

[bigkow44]

Slash's Score: 13 / 20
Status: Pass

You covered everything I was going to say.
It seems to plain though. Otherwise its
a pretty nice level, I would rate it better
if you showed it with the lights and stuff.

[Graal2001_FAQ]

Originally posted by magicbud3344
(LAMER POSTING)
3. Transparency to the front img. Where you see the grass on the front wall. That is actually an img. So you can walk behind it or so. I need to make the grass parts transparent.
(LAMER POSTING)

NPC Code:

---

//#CLIENTSIDE

if (playerenters) {

  setcoloreffect .4,.4,.4,0.99;

  drawaslight;  

  dontblock;

}

---

Transparent, yet you can still see it.

[KujaBTK]

I hate it.

[Timpan3]

15/20


A bit too plain, but its quite small so i guess thats ok.

[WanDaMan]

Plain XD

[Spark910]

Bottom of house is shows the Grass!
NPC Tree tops should be fiant lights, Floor isnt too bad, but not much there

Out of 20? Just double this:

Spark's Rating:5/10
-Not bad, but keep working to improve.

[VampiricTutorNewHD]

16/20.

It's not plain.
The grass on the outside is obviously on purpose.
It's not copying anything.
I like it.