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Old 08-18-2002, 03:06 AM
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"Full" Review.

Creativity - 9
I thought the levels were quite detailed, and the quests were somewhat long/adventurous. A few new "original" jobs were introduced, I won't mention them unless they(booj) want me to.

Levels - 7.5
The levels were very nice and detailed, very few errors or overabundance of tiles. Part of the map on the right side was empty, but I took into consideration that it was for future development.

NPCs - 7
It's all "so-so." I would of given higher/lower if most the server had not been in development for the NPCserver. Systems, etc.


Quests - 8.5
I liked the quests. There are about 10-11 upfront ones, and you don't stay in one place slashing millions of baddies. A few that I saw consisted of searching for items. Hints ARE given, throughout most of the playerworld, in fact. That was a plus.

Storyline - 6
You start out as a hero, yadda,yadda, and you are destined to go on quests. From there, I didn't see much that tied into it, but it's all for future development, so I didn't judge too harshly on this. There's enough now to "hook" most quest-loving players.

Score Overall: 38/50
Cynical Status: pass

Good job/luck Cynical team.

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Old 08-24-2002, 06:33 AM
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Old 08-24-2002, 06:37 AM
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Old 08-24-2002, 08:09 PM
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Old 08-25-2002, 12:19 AM
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Yay I love quests, Congrats to the Cynical Team
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Old 08-25-2002, 04:22 AM
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Cynical sounds like a good server.



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Old 08-25-2002, 05:31 AM
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Old 08-25-2002, 11:37 AM
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I don't see why you guys have to give Nemesis such a hard time about reviewing PWs. He DOES have a life outside of graal and work which takes up alot of his time.
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Old 08-25-2002, 11:03 PM
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I don't see why you guys have to give Nemesis such a hard time about reviewing PWs. He DOES have a life outside of graal and work which takes up alot of his time.
Then he shouldn't be an (assistant) game master, which takes up about 2/3rds of a persons life if done to their fullest ability.
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Old 08-26-2002, 02:05 AM
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Good Job and you worked hard Cynicle,GOOD LUCK!
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Old 08-26-2002, 08:52 AM
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he spends most times on npulse and stuff, i dont see anything wrong with that but he should take the time to review some pws that have made there way upto the third review
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Old 08-26-2002, 09:05 AM
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Then he shouldn't be an (assistant) game master, which takes up about 2/3rds of a persons life if done to their fullest ability.
I personally think game master should be an actually paying job but that's just me *shrugs*
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Old 08-26-2002, 07:51 PM
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Old 08-26-2002, 10:45 PM
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since im staff, ive seen all the levels of the pw, there decent quility they remind me of classic (good) ^_^. I think its pretty good, thats why I decided to join, The quests are great.
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Old 08-26-2002, 10:54 PM
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since im staff, ive seen all the levels of the pw, there decent quility they remind me of classic (good) ^_^. I think its pretty good, thats why I decided to join, The quests are great.
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Old 08-26-2002, 11:13 PM
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I don't see why you guys have to give Nemesis such a hard time about reviewing PWs. He DOES have a life outside of graal and work which takes up alot of his time.
If nemesis doesn't have time to handle a high-powered job on a game that people are PAYING to play, he should resign and let someone with more time on their hands run it.

That's the reason I'm leaving the PWA, and most of graal, once school starts.
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InsaneFishP0sse: Now if you PM Nemesis, he will go "I am Nemesis, the PW Admin, I handle almost all Playerworlds currently online"
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Old 08-26-2002, 11:29 PM
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Old 08-27-2002, 02:24 AM
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I personally think game master should be an actually paying job but that's just me *shrugs*
game master is a paying job

but its their assts that get payed nothing
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Old 08-29-2002, 12:52 AM
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Old 08-29-2002, 01:12 AM
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B00j has been working on it for a LONG time now so deserves this =)

I porbally wont play it though most PW's that are new I go on for 1day then get bored or realise its not for me!
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