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Old 07-20-2002, 01:51 PM
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rate, suggestions, etc

A recent level i made.
Rate it, tell me how to improve, you guys know the drill.
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Old 07-20-2002, 03:49 PM
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Oh well,I'll be the first to rate it.
The path is very good,
Oh well directly to the point.
The only thing that I find negative is:
The houses.
Change the wall tiles,they suck for outside,
use the normal ones.They give a better at-
mosphere.On the top houses the bottom tiles,
the one below the castle wall ones suck.Why have
blue mixed with brown? That doesn't fit very well to me.
On the bottom house the roof is original,but don't give
very good atmosphere.Oh well,I think that's it.
Atleast if your going to use those wall tiles,make them
non-tile error.there are some tile errors on the walls
if you look good Oh yes castle stairs to house
that looks a bit unreal,think about how a house would be
in real,then I would give you a better rating.Oh well btw
Josh <3 <3 from Gabbe

Edit:Forgot to rate it -_-,6/10.
Edit...Again!:Forgot to say clean out the rocks in the path.

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Old 07-20-2002, 04:25 PM
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Good, you overused the Swamp dark bit (Cut back) tile!
Too much path, looks the same really....
Not bad though

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Old 07-20-2002, 05:44 PM
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Old 07-20-2002, 06:13 PM
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Awesome, you don't need to improve anything. I really like the houses, original and all.
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Old 07-20-2002, 07:43 PM
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They're original (Houses),maybe too original
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Old 07-21-2002, 04:07 AM
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thanx for your comments and suggestions i will take some of them into consideration.

Can i get some more opinions on the level plz
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Old 07-21-2002, 06:22 AM
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all i can say is: WOW
pretty much the entire thing is great, i think the only thing i can ***** about (lol) is the path's texture. Vary the texture of the dirt inside the path, i like to use and alternating pattern. Maybe also, though it still looks cool as it is, on the building walls, use all the same castle wall bricks. dont alternate between top wall tiles and bottom wall tiles. Other than that, i repeat again: WOW.
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Old 07-21-2002, 07:49 AM
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i like it 7.5/10, very nice path, like the houses, although the edge tiles leading into the houses are errored, need to fix that...besides that its very nice, good job.
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Old 07-21-2002, 01:15 PM
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here is a second level i just finished up.

Tell me what you guys think.
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Old 07-21-2002, 03:05 PM
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Pretty,still that to me the houses don't give me the right atmosphere.Other than the houses it's very nice alot nicer than the first level to me.


8/10.
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Old 07-21-2002, 11:35 PM
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8/10 as well, i like it alot, very good use of tile edges and i quite like the houses.
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Old 07-22-2002, 04:39 AM
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preety nice
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Old 07-22-2002, 02:52 PM
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Im rating the second level. The path is nice just too many rocks and same type of dirt for whole thing, randomize it a little and use both types of bordering and it will be seczy, for the houses you used the same type of windows for two of them, which is ok just a little bit repetative. I like the tiling its not too cluttered, maybe just too much of that elevated grass stuff, and the water has too many waves. Id give it 7.5/10, good work.
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