i need some input

aires_graal · #1 11-26-2001, 04:17 PM

ok I know your all probably going to say this level sucks, but after you say that can you tell me some ways to make it look better? Its not done yet either, I am gonna add some npc's once my gfx makes some tropical things because its on an island, and probably some trees or something

Slaktmaster · #2 11-26-2001, 07:29 PM

Quite good but add more detail to the grass and make the grass borders less stright.

aires_graal · #3 11-27-2001, 01:56 AM

do you mean the the pathways? yea, i didnt know if i should make them less strait because i didnt want to over do it, but now i know

Philipp2001 · #4 11-27-2001, 02:13 AM

i mean more DETAILS

WoRlaNN2k · #5 11-27-2001, 05:26 AM

uh.... how did you make those house tiles look so good? my house tiles look crappy, lol.

aires_graal · #6 11-27-2001, 05:33 AM

i dont know, i thought mine looked all messed up

aires_graal · #7 11-27-2001, 06:43 AM

I made the pathway more have more curves and bends, and i add more detail. does it look better though?

aires_graal · #8 11-27-2001, 06:45 AM

forgot ppic

ancientphoenix · #9 12-11-2001, 08:36 AM

that just made it look worse

--Shadowless

konidias · #10 12-11-2001, 08:42 AM

I sure hope that level isn't connected to any other levels because you sure have a lot of stuff close to the edges.. It's like the providence style where you walk on another level and are halfway on top of some house roof.

The houses are decent but still a little plain.. and that roof deck or whatever on the top house.. green is NOT the color to go with.

Kumada · #11 12-11-2001, 11:04 AM

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Originally posted by konidias
I sure hope that level isn't connected to any other levels because you sure have a lot of stuff close to the edges.. It's like the providence style where you walk on another level and are halfway on top of some house roof.

The houses are decent but still a little plain.. and that roof deck or whatever on the top house.. green is NOT the color to go with.

.. You use "dont connect levels" ?
turn it off its a lot funner =)
Im posting some screenshots ofa few levels for trimaris soon

royce · #12 12-11-2001, 01:24 PM

#1. If it is going to be a tropical island you need to make a beech instead of a cliff line...This will help those level connection problems...
#2. That house on top, the table up there needs to be fixed.
#3. You need to add some more grass items and make it look real, not just a few little grass thigns here and there...
#4. You really messed up with that house on top....so many tile errors below the windows....there are tiles in teh tileset that correct this, i know the bricks will never be alligned but there are tiles that could make it better...
#5. Take out those black tiles near water fall plz

Fix up these things and examine it for some more errors then fix again then I think it will turn out great!

haunter · #13 12-12-2001, 04:07 AM

yes... all obey Mr. Chik! he is Jesus! he will lead us to complete cleanleyness (sp)

aires_graal · #14 12-12-2001, 10:35 AM

Ok, well the levels are connected..... i used level generator, but dont worry, i wont have it to if you go to the next level you appear on the roof of some house, and......... i dont think it looks any better! maybe i should just quit making levels and do something else? :grrr: grrr this is making me frustrated

note: that media player is a npc im working on..... and it wont be there after i make the shop or whatever it goes in

yoshee15 · #15 12-12-2001, 10:46 AM

you still need to make it more non-straight like this: