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Old 10-05-2001, 09:01 AM
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" The Ghost Pirate Chronicles "

This is something to read while Graal is down...I wrote this a few and finish this a few seconds ago...Tell me what you think (There will be alot of chapters) I might post a new chapter each week Aswell as log them onto the Cargohold

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Created by a unknown father ,twin brothers fight for control of a single realm the first Grethuss, God of Light, the second is Demoor, God of Darkness. Grethuss and Demoor both fueled by their differences battled across the realm Afterworld. The brothers were the only two entities on Afterworld.

At some point in time a object landed into Afterworld from the white and black skies. The object making a creator while hitting the ground. After a few seconds or so passed a glowing light came from the object swirling it around like a fly around a light. While walking the planes of Afterworld Grethuss noticed this and for a unknown reason the glowing light formed a angelic looking creature as Grethuss looked upon it. The new creature spoke from which he should as his form started to come together. "I am Alaris." spoke the new entity.

As Alaris learned the ways of Grethuss' light, Demoor grew ever more angry at the new company Grethuss had. Demoor watched the skies for another object to fall from the sky. Time after time he watched. As he returned to his sky watching he seen a object begin to cross the sky. In a frenzy he rushed to where it landed. As he reached the place where the object had fallen he sees Grethuss and Alaris already talking to the new entity. In fury he uses his dark powers to attack the trio. Demoor threw Alaris to the ground while hitting Grethuss with his dark power. Demoor looked upon the new entity and was reaching for it. Before Demoor's dark hand reached to pick up it, Alaris , now half as powerful as Grethuss, smacked Demoor with a energy bolt. In a rage Demoor picks up Alaris and throws him half way across Afterworld. Grethuss recovering swiftly took the new entity back to his Castle of Light. This new entity was named Fainah.

Once again another object fell from the skies landing closely near Demoor's fortress. Demoor rushes out to find the object alone with the swirling glowing light flying around the object. As he watched as the glowing light grew into a dark figure, Demoor grin. The creature spoke his name of Chaian. They returned to Demoor's fortress in which Chaian ,like Grethuss did with Alaris, learned the ways of darkness.
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Too Long, it makes me have a headache.
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:04 AM
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Too Long, it makes me have a headache.

I guess you must have troubles reading books then
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:05 AM
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Cap'n, I'd read it if it were seperated into paragraphs...when it's one big clump it's hard to keep your place and it seems to take forever.
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:06 AM
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Cap'n, I'd read it if it were seperated into paragraphs...when it's one big clump it's hard to keep your place and it seems to take forever.
Yes I do have problems with paragraphs

I'll go try to fix it >=)
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:07 AM
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I like it. Yes, I did read through it all.
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I guess you must have troubles reading books then
nah i read harry potter in 3 days :P
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:08 AM
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Angry

its too long to read
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Ok I tried to work in some sort of paragraph form

Just remember Ghost has a paragraph problems!
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:11 AM
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Ok I tried to work in some sort of paragraph form

Just remember Ghost has a paragraph problems!
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:15 AM
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nah i read harry potter in 3 days :P
Pssh. You're slow. I read the biggest one (3rd?) in like 2 hours. I am a uber reader
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Old 10-05-2001, 09:40 AM
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Ok I tried to work in some sort of paragraph form

Just remember Ghost has a paragraph problems!
I liked it .. It was cool.
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Old 10-05-2001, 04:23 PM
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I read it, i found it neato -.-
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