Is it bad? You be the judge.

[Aethorpe]

I've never really done any levels before, but this little classic project I am working on has me shoveling my way through alot of levels trying to make them look more presentable, and I was just wondering about the quality of my work.

So, as a non LAT type developer who is suddenly forced to produce alot of levels, I present to you a sample for the judging. Tell me, is it bad?

[syltburk]

I dont like it at all.

[Snakeandy7]

The inside house is a problem, same with the entrence to the cave in a forest.
Other than that it is good.

[Aethorpe]

Originally Posted by Snakeandy7

The inside house is a problem, same with the entrence to the cave in a forest.
Other than that it is good.

What's wrong with the inside house? :o

[Snakeandy7]

You have a cliff as it's wall :[

[Shaun]

I don't like the outside at all, but I like what you tried to do with the inside. Unfortunately, there are still many, many tile errors. The creativity demonstrated on the inside is, however, a pleasant surprise.

[Darlene159]

Originally Posted by Snakeandy7

You have a cliff as it's wall :[

I like the layout of the inside, shows creativity, and it looks like the inside of a cave

There are alot of tile errors both inside and out though, alot with the posts...try chopping off the rounded bottom if it isnt going to be in grass, and using a different top that isnt for grass also (in the places that you used it that isnt green at the top)

[Crono]

The first one isnt THAT bad, we need to get some of that old bright level style back to set a real graal mood. :x

[Aethorpe]

Originally Posted by Gerami

The first one isnt THAT bad, we need to get some of that old bright level style back to set a real graal mood. :x

Bright level style? Please elaborate?

[Aethorpe]

Originally Posted by Darlene159

I like the layout of the inside, shows creativity, and it looks like the inside of a cave

There are alot of tile errors both inside and out though, alot with the posts...try chopping off the rounded bottom if it isnt going to be in grass, and using a different top that isnt for grass also (in the places that you used it that isnt green at the top)

Thank you, creativity is about the only thing I have going for me.

Well, as far as the 3-4 green pixels that don't belong, I don't think it's going to kill anyone. The post serve thier purpose and give the right effect.

[Aethorpe]

Originally Posted by Shaun

I don't like the outside at all, but I like what you tried to do with the inside. Unfortunately, there are still many, many tile errors. The creativity demonstrated on the inside is, however, a pleasant surprise.

The general consensus seems to be that my outdoors levels stink, darn, I thought they looked very foresty.

[WanDaMan]

Both are very nice, should add some light effects and stuff

[Aethorpe]

Originally Posted by WanDaMan

Both are very nice, should add some light effects and stuff

Thanks.

I must sleep now, I've done alot, and I have alot more to do.

[syltburk]

damn 3 posts in a row, wan wtf are u thinking? very nice? look at the levels again.. look at the obvious tile errors ... tiling..

[WanDaMan]

I still think it's very creative, there is one or two obvious tile errors but apart from that the levels are pretty decent.