It certainly doesn't suck and I certainly don't hope you want to die, but it could do with a few little tweaks to make it great IMO. At the moment where it joins with the water (with the tiles from the bridge base tiles) it doesn't look like it's above the water, overhanging from the cliffs. If you added another layer of these tiles somehow to make it fit like they were reaching down the level of the cliff, I think it'd work really well. It's a great idea, just needs the fine tuning to make it fit into the rest of the level
