
07-12-2004, 06:36 PM
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The Ice Cream Social
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Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: SoCal
Posts: 541
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Parts I Like:
-The paths, they aren't just straight paths, which adds a bit of needed interest to the level.
Parts that need improvement:
-The overall design of the level is dull. Things don't flow like they should.
Perhaps seperate some aspects of the room into different rooms. (Like the bed or the statue thing.)
-The choice of tiles don't flow. In one spot you have plain ground tiles, yet in the next you have more regal tiles. In addition, your tiles could be changed to provide more eye-candy for the player.
-The signs. Maybe this is just a personal annoyance of mine, but I can't stand signs at every door/entrance to direct users that for some reason can't figure out what a house is for.
Overall: 5/10
Try to change up the tiles you used, maybe change the design of the house.
Overall, not too shabby if you are a beginner. |
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