06-30-2004, 10:27 PM
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Nil Recurring
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Join Date: Jun 2002
Posts: 1,911
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It's very meh. It seems like you used a path gen for the puddles and dirt path. I like to make an outline with the gen, then edit it from there to make it less boxy, but like Crono said, not so spiky. I'll give it a 6.5/10. Decent, but not great. |
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I got wiring loose inside my head
I got books that I never ever read
I got secrets in my garden shed
I got a scar where all my urges bled
I got people underneath my bed
I got a place where all my dreams are dead
Swim with me into your blackest eyes
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