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Old 04-01-2004, 07:14 PM
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Ok, how about this;
  • look for the northwest to southeast path corner tile
  • look for the rest of the tree on tree tiles (upper right hand corner is what I noticed)
  • the windows are way to close, it shouldn't look like a skyscraper x.x
  • the paths either get really wide or realy skinny, they ought to be a bit more conformistic
  • the black and brown path just plain doesn't look that great, choose some different tiles
  • the whole of the house in the second screen looks like someone repeatedly bombed the place, or it was made as a joke
  • the floors for the other houses look kinda weird, aswell as the stairs, the stair tiles should be more linear (big at top, small at bottom, not back and forth)
  • houses look goofy with water right in front of them "omfg the sewer is broke again!"

and uh, thats about all I noticed, anything I didn't comment on looks pretty good though
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