
10-31-2003, 01:28 AM
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So this is teh end...
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Join Date: Jul 2003
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Posts: 165
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nice... but...
window and its lighting... nuff said... perhapse take the clear square window NPC image that would fit there and instead of the top part being black, make it look like you're looking outside (in other words, put a few grass tiles there..) and the windows will be fine... except for the lighing... that's pretty easy though, just crop it a bit to fit the area... paint'll do.
nice effort for the walls, but they just don't look inviting.... trial and error with these... really, you want to make them elaborate, yet simple... elegant, yet general...
i like the floor... but others may not... that's the curse of the LAT.. what you like others may not..
and for the corner pillars... the tops have green at the corners, since this is an outside tile... BUT DON"T FRET! just take the tileset, open in paint, and make the corners black. then save the image (as a .jpg or .gif... i do both) and use that image as a NPC. the black'll cover the corners up.
and perhapse make a little bit bigger... it looks too crowded... and after you make it bigger, add a colorful NPC or two.... possibly a lamp, a plant, or a picture.
there ya go. (PS. this is how I want my ratings done... like this... cover every possible detail that you can... and offer sugestions...)
overal, it's coming along great. just needs some work, and it'll be server material!
(ps... i don't rate... i give colorful criticism and help.) |
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