[draygin]

Ok so we'll start from top to bottom.

The building is very ugly at best. I recommend completely rethinking the design of it. If you want more details I'm referring to the roof, the walls, and the floor. (yes I'm aware thats the same thing as everything but some people prefer specifics)

The grass, It's not bad I would say about average and will be acceptable if you remove the half grass tiles as with the new tileset it looks incomplete with out both sides of it.

The Path, I really like this design I've seen it in a few other levels yours would be very nice except where you just dragged it through the dirt. I recomend deleting all of the 4 path tiles then selecting all 4 and right clicking on the spots where the path was before removing the path tiles. It makes it look more presentable and thought out.

The Beach, The grass to sand is all zig zag VVVV I recommend trying to give it some curves. The way you have the transition between the two grass to sand tiles looks very poor and unnatural how you currently have it. I recommend putting more thought into it if you insist on switching between the two. Tile errors on the water to sand to grass on the left side where you transition between the two it just ends.. You currently have an over abundance of rocks most notibaly the large ones. This is a matter of preference but maybe if you removed a few (just a few not alot) I feel it might make the beach look nicer.

The water, looks good.


I think that about sums it up. Not bad if you consider your self one of average skill and with some changes it could definatly be a great level.