07-25-2003, 09:09 AM
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That Guy
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Join Date: Dec 2001
Location: Seattle, WA
Posts: 2,528
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my suggestions are to make the r's a little more defined on the arc.. the look kinda like i's.. :X, and to make the face a little less transparent, I thought that flower on your chin was a zit or something for about a minute before I realized it was transparent.. lo |
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