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Old 07-25-2003, 06:33 AM
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Originally posted by Drakmith
Okay... Fun time then.

Here is how GFX "Critique" is properly done.

W whatsit... "Kenny"

The face in your signature, the left side (Our left) seems a bit too flat. Like he's missing actually defining cheek bones.

The bottom-right side of the chin seems a bit misproportioned also, like you took one serious left-hook or something.

The nose... The shape is all wrong, it looks entirely flat. Shading is a good thing, please remember this.

*Won't even ask why you're telling us what you're listening to*

Background colour.. Orange is original, not many people use it, So there's a creativity point there, but why not Spice it up a bit? That bland orange reminds me of those Supermarkets built in the 60's with "Save" in the name..

Skin tones... Either his skin tone was chosen badly or he's one serious hermit.

And the hair could use more texture as well... As is it's... Just kinda there.

Below I have posted a "Revise" of your Signature, you can IM me if you want to use it O.o (Keyword there... If)

Otherwise.. That (C) is there for good reason buster.
I must say your comeback just owned!
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