
04-24-2003, 03:22 AM
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Kyden
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Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: PA
Posts: 1,906
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First thing I noticed is you have inconsistent shadowing in your level. They are on the one side of the house, yet still prevalant on the cliffs when they should of also been on the house.
Many things I circle I just don't like, such as the majority of your bush creations, I don't think they really fit together well and I don't suggest using them. But that's your decision.
On top of your house, I really don't understand what your going for with that door. Maybe you could explain that X.x.
As for your beach tiling, I don't like the transfer from the beach to the wet beach tiling, but then again, I can't think of anything off hand to do it.
Overall, it was pretty good, yet I don't really like your house in the top left. As I often say, people tend to get more fancy and exotic then they should, the houses just don't come out right. The cloud idea is a very nice idea, yet if this was for a server I would only use it in a selected area and not over the whole server.
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