03-24-2003, 01:57 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: new account: Trevor
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Almost everything is good when looked at by itself. But, it looks like it was all thrown together randomly. You need to work on the over-all atmosphere. I can tell it took a lot of talent to make this, but what you need to do is work harder on putting it together. |
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