[AlexH]

The main things that I don't like are the head and the legs.

The head just doesn't seem to fit in with the body. This might be because it has lots of shading but the neck seems to be one flat colour. Shading the neck might fix it.

Legs look good but they seem to curve inwards as it gets up to the theighs. Have you tried other ways to do the trousers and this one looked the best? If so keep them, if not I suggest trying it.

Other than that it looks good.
But my main problem is with the head and neck.