
12-06-2002, 11:31 AM
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Kyden
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Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: PA
Posts: 1,906
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Ok, some things.
1. Black must go.
2. The house, change that, looks dumb with three supports that don't even fit. Good idea but it would look a lot better with wood supports.
3. Don't use path generator or use it as an outline and go back through to get rid of the many rocks.
4. Detail, use more detail tiles. Take a look around in these forums, it's a very common thing that makes your level looks nice.
5. Keep at it. Don't get discouraged, if you're just beginning level making it's a good start.
Rating: 2/10
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