[SupermanJR]

Screamzy! I'm going to rate you NOT as a beginer. >P
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First thing is First.
Sand-
K, you do know there are more sand parts than that. They can improve your level by great ammounts.
And, your sand is all the same. Theres multiple tiles for little sand parts (Not the rocks, the sand themselves) Look around for em. If you can't find them, open up a new level and use Path Gen' and grab the SAND ( Not Rocks ) from that and seperate them.
Nice rock detailing, not to little, not too much. Good job on that.
Ground Detail-
Yeah, thats fine aside from the little road pieces. Ditch those. Try not to add to many things you can't walk through in your level. Nobody likes an impassable level.
Nice job with the bushes, you have the cut ones next to em aswell. Cool.
Jules-
Two things.
Make them more random.
The grass ontop, make that random aswell, usuing the I'm going attachment to send.
Trees-
Is that a NPC? Lol. Looks good.
But the vines look kind-a odd to me.. Just a perfect green doesn't fit. x.x
Water-
That looks cool.
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Overall rating- 8/10
Nice. >P