
11-17-2002, 07:19 PM
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Ex-Graal Global
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Join Date: Oct 2001
Location: England
Posts: 10,892
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Ok this is marked from a begginers point of view, as I take it your starting out at levels or haven't had much time to be as creative with the tiles!
Cliffs:
There good in some places but lack in others, I can see you tried to make them good then sort of bot bored as they are too straight, try and wind them around a bit. The grass on it is also a bit too straight and boring.
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Houses:
Nice idea here, but I feel the doorways are far too big and so makes it look plain and blank.
River:
The river is good, I only started using these tiles recently, try and make the river more windey.
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Also try and add bits to the dirt by the river
See Attachment.
Grass Detail:
Thats coming along but try and use a bigger range of tiles, instead of just a few of them! Also try and not repeat the same tiles too much in one level, if your running out of ideas, add a pond with a bench and trees maybe. For other detail ideas
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Sparks Begginer Rating: 7/10
-Alot of things you could have added
Sparks Normal Rating: 5/10
-Its got good ideas, develop them more! This is marked agains all the levels Ive ever seen, so ignore this really. But I like to put it in anyway. |
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