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Originally posted by Judge_Spunky
This lead me to believe that the dragon was immortal
This says otherwise.
Besides that little desceptancy, there's nothing wrong with it. I like it a lot, and it's very creative.
Though I didn't get to read the previous version, I think this version sounds quite refined.
Good work. 
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dang, you are right. dragons aren't immortal, it does sound like Avildar is saying that he is an immortal. thanks a bunch, that could of been real bad.
the other one is in this forum as well, look for "Legend's Chronicles: Storyline" thread.