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Old 10-05-2002, 01:24 PM
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Re: well, rewrote the WHOLE storyline...

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Originally posted by Kuza

"Mortal, you dare reap me of my fortunes?"
This lead me to believe that the dragon was immortal

Quote:
Originally posted by Kuza
"It was nearing the time of death for the dragon as well."
This says otherwise.

Besides that little desceptancy, there's nothing wrong with it. I like it a lot, and it's very creative.
Though I didn't get to read the previous version, I think this version sounds quite refined.
Good work.
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