[Zurkiba]

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Axel was born into Dustari durning the towards the climax of the Dustari-Zormite war. He loved his life and his family, he wanted to grow up to be a great Dustari Warrior who would kill the Zormites. But when his parents died him and Zurkiba became thieves and started to steal things. There was some relics in a chest that Axel admired greatly... they were a wand, a few books, and a testament for a mage. When his brother Zurkiba was drafted into the army (Axel was too young to be drafted) he bacme depressed and began to remember his parents which made him even more depressed. So he went to an isolated place and stayed there for many years... reading and learning the Magecraft Ways. There was one type of magic that caught his eye the most, it was the Dark Magic. Axel was declared dead untill Zurkiba started to search for him... and when he was found he was accepted back into Dustari as a powerful mage. Him and his brother were given land in the Northern regions for their services to Dustari and they began to
make their own band of soldiers to take down the foes of Dustari.