
08-20-2002, 01:54 PM
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Banned
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Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: South of Heaven
Posts: 86
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Ermmm... If a cleric healed a Vampire, it would kill him. Vampires are undead, light magic kills them.
Change "Clerics" to "Warlocks"
Edit: I would apply for the GAT position... but this story line is so out of whack, and the description for the paladin left me staring at the screen with my mouth open and my eyes wide saying "aduhr?"
Suggestion: In your descriptions, you run your sentences too much. Try to use actual grammar. Grammar's best friend's name is called "Spelling", and another one is "Punctuation". Grammar can't live without his two best friends! So you need to find his two friends so that you can have proper sentences and descriptions that make SENSE! (That sounds like a neat quest idea... *starts making it a quest where you have to find comma's, quotation marks, etc. and all the letters of the alphabet*) |
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