
08-16-2002, 01:27 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: g forums
Posts: 606
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This level shows great potential, but it just doesn't do the trick as a level for me. The whole levels is completely tiled up, like slow down, have some plain areas here and there. I personally dislike desert tiles so close to grass, it's like walking out on a HOT day and seeing snow on the ground.\
I'm glad to see you can cliff tile correctly, besides a few spots which the cliffs were too close together and you couldn't add the shadowing. The river needs to lay off the grass to water bunches, as well as the shallow ripples. Try not to overdo the grass tiling.
Overall you show the traits of a good level maker, you just have to know how to add the final touches which make it pleasant to the eye, not so cluttered. |
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