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Old 07-22-2002, 02:46 PM
Neglegence2002 Neglegence2002 is offline
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Too many flowers and mushrooms, definetly get rid of a lot of those. And if you are going to put lots of tiling try to make it more random and zig-zaggy. I would change the house and get rid of the lamp, table, jule cliffs, and (since I hate the things) the gravestones, make them into a nice garden or something aesthetically pleasing. The water is cool but you might want to get rid of the red tree right next to it, doesnt mix. I agree with a lot of the other people, too much clutter. Try to find a balance, get rid of the purple rock and unless those fences are absolutley necessary, can em. Maybe add some swamp tiles here and there they look kind of nice. You may want to consider downsizing that house it takes up a lot of space, and did I mention less mushrooms and no fences? You could put cooler stuff where the extra house stuff was like maybe another little pond or something. Add a little pond with waterfall or something on top of the house with some lighting effects and maybe treetop.gif around it itd be cool, also you may want to consider changing the roof tiles to the chimney house ones they are easier to work with in my opinion. I would give the rating a 3.5/10, it is a nice level for a playerhouse or something just needs some work. Keep at it though.
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