[Deek2]

heres some constructive critisizm;
The next is too long, and how it connects to the body is bad
the shoudlers are too drooped
im not being exact, but im sure thats not how boobs go o,o
shes too skinny around the waist area
She doesn't have a butt, or at least if she does, it's too small
her arms.....her arms are too skinny, and there also too long
and i dunno about the legs, but according to the right leg that you drew (where it shows the unfinished knee) her upper part of her legs are too short.
Sorry for being soo strict, but the anatomy that i studied was really in detail. If i remembered the link i would post it but it really taught some good stuff about positions, anatomy and horizon perspective stuff and that stuff. It's good though ^,^''
Edit: i looked at the waist wrong, the waist is alright XD