[Jinx]

Review : Farelands

The server has been re-submitted to me for another review.

Onlinestartlocal is still the same. You can choose from a plethera of different classes. There is still no description for the classes, and there are still no descriptions for the kingdom selections, although the level seems to be fixed up a bit.

The levels for the starting town are nice, at least the outside ones are. There are very few inside levels.

The rest of the overworld is blank.

The owner of this PW wants players to make the playerworld once it gets up, he wants them to submit buildings and stuff. I'm fine with that, but you still have to do more work on the overworld. You can leave lots of room for stuff like that, but PLEASE at least tile them up, put some grass and flower tiles here and there, so the levels at least look appealing. Put some trees here and there, etc. I wouldn't rely completley on players trying to make great levels. Try making a few towns by yourself, not leaving it up to the players.

You'll need some quests, you don't have any.

Creativity - 5

Levels - 2
Very few levles were done, but I liked the ones that were done, I think they were done pretty well. The server would be a lot better if you could use that level skill a lot more.

NPCs - 1
I could only find one NPC, a tailor NPC.

Quests - 0
No quests. Plain and simple.

Storyline - 5
At the beggining you pick Class and Kingdom, I assume that would tie in with a storyline somewhere......

Overall Score - 13 out of 50

Farelands Status = Fail

-Jinx