[konidias]

Here, let me go through what I think he did wrong in this review.


Try being creative and working with menus and such. Once the player decides what class, profession, etc. Where did he/she come from? Where is he/she going? Try to downplay the fact that this is a "playerworld" in game, and make it more story-like.

This is pure opinion. Every playerworld doesn't have to have a storyline about where the player came from and where they are going. That is personal preference.


Green rupee? I thought you were using your own curency system called Quartz? I shouldn't even see these diamond-like things if thats the case.

Again, maybe they just changed the name? Who are you to say what graphic they use for their currency as long as it's a legal graphic.


Moving on, swiming down a river, hmm... Diving? Been done, but o.k.

This doesn't even need to be mentioned. Tons of things have been done before in other games. Pretty much everything in any playerworld has most likely been done before. This is just adding insult to injury.


A squar map with no ocean or sea? Your creating a World are you not?

The shape of the world should make no difference. Square, circle, or geographically correct. This is just a matter of opinion.


Overall, the review wasn't bad, but next time you review a pw, please leave out all the commentary. It isn't needed. They are asking you to review their playerworld to see if it's good enough to pass. Not for your personal opinion on what you see.

I probably wouldn't have passed the pw either from the sounds of it, but I surely wouldn't put in my own personal thoughts on the matter.