Beter, I would remove some of the dirt pathway so it feels more like a path, maybe even add a nice walkway in the level aswell, add a few more trees (especialy one at the top to break up that straight line.) shif the two a nudge over, and that fencing doesnt work...
Getting alot beter though.
I uploaded a copy showing what i like and dont like (likes are in blue, changes in red.)
Urizen
