[fuzie]

well i think this could be improved:

Story
The year is 1425bc. The world is in a path of liberty. There have been some main problems, just local ones. Groups of Evil, Monsters, and Leaders have been coming around the Contenent of Malhangaia. The local towns, and Citys have no fear really. They are ready for almost anything. You as the player, will help the locals, and Towns people Defeat these Armys of Evil to keep Peace in the Land of Malhangaia. Once all is settled, Malhangaia will continue to Florish, with Peace and Harmony. Try to keep it that way.

.....nah dont bother,just format and start over :o