
08-03-2012, 01:48 AM
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Prinking Droblem
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Join Date: Jul 2003
Posts: 7,013
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i like the last two or three story parts. but.
"Scholars revealed that it wasn't a meteor, but a moon. For many years, the Suns of the Bomy planet had passed near the land. Sometimes, the Suns would pass right over one another. Causing a Sylvester, that heated the Graalian world with bright red intensity."
these scholars sound silly. first its a moon, then its a planet. It has multiple suns, iv heard of multiple suns in other stories but usually planets rotate around suns not suns around planets. but its a moon also?! why you confuse me. also what is a Sylvester?
either way, when is this bomy evasion starting that part sounds crunk. |
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