
05-27-2012, 03:09 AM
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Owner of Corinthia
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Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: MAssachusetts, USA
Posts: 131
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Oh wow Bayne.
The Beach:
the beach is wayyyy too straight, try adding some detail to it, make it less repetitive. Same with the shallow/deep water. Add a little detail, and some spunk to it. You know, spruce it up.
The Cliffs:
Again, repetitive. Everything is too straight, and happens over and over again. Try changing directions a bit more often.
I'm not a professional leveler, but that is my advice to you. |
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Yep.
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