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Old 03-14-2012, 08:16 PM
Good_Ol_Daze Good_Ol_Daze is offline
IT'S TIME TO PARTY LET'S
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Your line-break between "some" and "power" is freaking me out. If you chunk up your first paragraph similarly you' have a good poem going on.
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