[Galdor]

Horrible grass and water color, the tree tops looks like those weird 3d images that are hidden within another image that you can see by looking at it cross-eyed (especially at screen nr 3)

A house with a second floor built on top of a tree, with waterfalls at the top? lol xD

On screen 2 in the middle, I think it would make more sense if there was like a bridge there instead.

Just keep practicing and I'm sure it will look good in the end, but right now it does not look very impressive.