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Old 08-22-2011, 04:02 AM
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In addition to what Tricxta pointed out, the level seems very crowded. It's almost as if, in order to detail the level, you just randomly placed objects. I see many small tile-errors. I'm not going to point them out; if you look for them, you should find them.

I'll list out a few things that (in my opinion) could improve the level...
  1. Instead of having the shrubs scattered everywhere, group them, and don't use so many.
  2. The wooden pillar transition between the water and grass looks unnatural, and seems to break the perspective. You should try something else.
  3. I think you should remove most of the boulders, however, I understand if it is meant to be a rocky area I guess.
  4. The way the waterfall is at the moment makes little sense. It begins above where the cliff starts. Move the beginning of it down, or create your own solution.
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