
06-13-2011, 01:23 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2009
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I like you're work, but it could benefit from a few minor changes.
1) The cork in the first image appears jammed inside the container. It should be poking out of the top a little bit.
2) I agree that the color of the soda might be a little too light. It looks like a thicker liquid..like chocolate milk. Also, the cap on the bottle looks obnoxiously large.
3) The top/down view of the gun just doesn't look like a gun. It looks a little too short in length; at first glance they look like over-sized bullet.
You definitely have some good quality work here, nice job. |
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