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Old 05-28-2011, 07:32 PM
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Your code styling is inconsistent and looks terrible. Please do the following:

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Originally Posted by fowlplay4 View Post
How to style your script properly with jsbeautifer.org

Copy-paste your code into the code text area.



Settings:
- Indent with 2 spaces
- Braces with control statement
- Un-check all Checkboxes

Click 'Beautify'
Things that caught my eye:

setTimer(.005, 1); - setTimer(float): The minimum value is 0.05, and it's only one parameter. Use this.scheduleevent() if you need to pass parameters to the looping event.

PHP Code:
function getItems() 
  { 
  for (
clientr.weps temp.weps
    { 
    return 
temp.weps// only returns the first weapon.
    

  } 
I would guess you were aiming to do the following:

PHP Code:
function getItems() {
  return 
clientr.weps// returns an array of weapons.

You also have numerous amounts of active debugging code, and other logic errors. Like the fact you're sending multiple triggers in one block of code for next to no reason, and calling useItem where it doesn't exist and attempting to access the DB on the client-side.

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Originally Posted by xAndrewx View Post
I'll make it bold for the people that replied above
That doesn't make it okay.

The code gallery shouldn't become a repository of poorly written broken scripts. Code reviews can take place outside the forums without issue but to me this sub-forum should be for proper working scripts which developers can take, use, and learn from without issue.
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