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Old 08-01-2001, 02:35 AM
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The grass looks a l il funny. I WUB THE WATER!!
The tops of the houses look like they are bent pieces of paper.
The walls on the houses look REALLY simple, you could add more detail to them. The window tiles look good on the walls. The fence tiles dont fit the setting. The entrance of the first dock, I think it needs a bottom to let us know it isn't another piece of paper. I think the rocks would look alot better if you animated them, same deal with the rest of the water objects.
I can't really complain about the tent, accept that you might want to add some pieces of wood sticking out where the structure of the tent would be placed(just as extra detail).

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