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Old 04-21-2009, 07:40 AM
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Originally Posted by Elk View Post
The Good: I love the way you did "Darkshire." The fire looks great, excellent colors. The chains and buttons look good as well.

The Bad: I don't really like the pattern in the top left corner of the parchment, maybe make it look like it's curling up on the edge instead. Also, the wood pattern in the shoutbox creates the illusion of a line going down the length of it. It was the first thing I noticed and I think it detracts from the piece as a whole. One other thing I just noticed, there are two misplaced pixels of color on two of the boards in the shoutbox.

This is more of a suggestion, but could you make the lettering on the buttons pop a little more? They are kind of hard to see.
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