
04-17-2010, 11:55 AM
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graal player lord
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: Florida
Posts: 1,094
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Hi,
You really shouldn't make your levels so predictable, not so much as a bad thing but you're using certain tiles repetitively.
Outside:
-Tables are obnoxious and they don't make sense
-Should use more imagination with them and make them Graal-realistic
-Stone Path doesn't have much design to it
-Use a better design to give it some tang and there is so many tile errors
-Spamming the window tiles
-Don't use the window tiles so much
Inside:
-Stairs/Crates/WhateverTheyAre don't make any sense.
-Make them Graal-realistic and a better sense of design in it
-The level shape & size is not right.
-I believe the level is too small for all the stuff you want in it
-Floor is just bland
-Don't be afraid to add more then one design , the floor is a big part in levels (imo)
The levels are decent but they crave more detail and design to them. |
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