10-30-2009, 03:04 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Philadelphia
Posts: 3,038
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Well what exactly doesn't work?
Put a different echo in each statement and see where the problem occurs. |
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Oh squiggly line in my eye fluid. I see you lurking there on the peripheral of my vision.
But when I try to look at you, you scurry away.
Are you shy, squiggly line?
Why only when I ignore you, do you return to the center of my eye?
Oh, squiggly line, it's alright, you are forgiven.
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