
06-07-2009, 05:05 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Posts: 1,366
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the present lacks shading, because the top is just as bright as the side, it doesn't look like theres a different angle, the sword is way too small.
also try not to copy paste stuff, the right side is the exact opposite as the left side of the present, for lines this is okay, but not for shading or texture.
please don't take this as bad critics, im just saying what i think needs improvement. |
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