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Old 04-16-2009, 05:10 PM
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Much better than the last one. Technically speaking it's nice, but I have a few problems with the style.

-Water, your water is very "crab" like. Try making the water flow more smoothly or something. I don't like the water on the top left of the level, it makes the level look wrong.

-Deep sand, try making it flow better. It looks like little lumps randomly sticking around and it's not so nice. Also doesn't really make logical sense heh.

Love the detail on top of the cliff on the left. I like the technical aspect of the level, specially around the waterfall.

Keep going.
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