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Old 09-27-2006, 11:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Goboom View Post
SWIM SWIM!
Colored some lineart from pixelation...
Lineart:

My Color:


C+C please!
Right off the top, the light part is saded kind of wierd which gives it a very flat look. You are better off shading the bottom of the ehad as well.
Next you shaded the legs directly below the leg in a wierd manner.

You shaded the top but not the bottom. I think it would look better with shading on bottom.

The water lookswierd to be honest. You gotta change it and make the levels wavier and with maybe more dithering? But honestly, just make it wavy, that's the part that bugs me.

Aaaand that's all I got! <3
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