
08-18-2006, 06:29 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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Nice use of heavy shadows on the sword.
The perimeter of the rose is a little scratchy (even for thorns) and both the stem and the flower could benefit greatly from an adjustment in the contrast of the highlight. Another thing that might help is to continue the foilage around the top where the flower comes out, the green will give the flower more contrast (like the left side) |
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