[coreys]

sorry for not clarifying. Had you heard me said it myself rather than read the text, you wouldn't take it so harshly. At the time I didn't have time to say much in how to improve it. I spent about all of 5 or 6 minutes with that revision, so it wouldn't be much. Maybe soon I'll make actual constructive critism, but this wouldn't be the first time I've posted on this forum, and those who have seen my posts shouldn't think of me as one to make unthoughtful remarks. Let alone just insults on others work. I'm sorry if I've offended anyone.