[Tom]

These are quite nice ^_^ I always thought you were just a gani artist, obviously you have talents else where.

Like Chicken said, hes way to pale, but the whole, anatomy, i thinks the word err, well his body structure is all corrct, hes got a bit of a pop belly xD
The eyes are a bit square, and at the top of the shoulders add 1 shade around the bends so they smooth off ^_^

Nice work.