01-06-2006, 10:03 PM
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The Driftwood of Graal
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Join Date: Mar 2002
Location: Mississippi
Posts: 1,547
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As some have said, I highly recommend differentiating from the norm a bit more. The supplied story feels a bit muddled in places, and provides no real grasping concept that's novel or even memorable. It looks like it has the potential to be good, too.
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